<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><strong><font color="#0000ff"> 首先感谢夜空白云联友提出许多的宝贵意见!我就借此机会对此组联作个简要说明,蓝色部分为我所回。</font></strong></div><div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>夜空白云</i>在2007-6-25 10:40:02的发言:</b><br/></div><p class="quote">给第一名提点意见:<span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第一联:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">东坡誉美佳人妒;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">西陆飘香举子忙。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"></span><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">上联,如果作者不注明,也可以看作是咏西湖的,东坡也有名句“欲把西湖比西子”,比“从来佳茗似佳人”有名得多。另外,“佳茗似佳人”最多说是佳茗和佳人平起平坐,又没说佳茗胜佳人,佳人有什么理由“妒”呢?</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff"> 来者:正如夜空白云联友所说,我在构思时也曾担心过读者会否有这样近似的理解,是有两个理由让我这样写的:一“欲把”可以理解为纵有誉美之念,却还未付之现实。而“从来”的判定式的表述则使“誉美”着实了,所以排除了“西湖”指定了“茶”。至于“妒”字的用法,试想那个佳人愿意看到自己被茶比下去呢?文学作品在一定程度上或多或少有加入作者主观因素,或许这就是我的粗浅理解吧,不知能否作为理由?:)</font><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,槐花黄,举子忙,典出</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">《南部新书》:长安举子落第者,六月后不出,谓之过夏。多借清净庙院,作文章,名曰「夏课」。时语曰:“槐花黄,举子忙。”,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">说的是夏天,和西陆“秋天”没什么关系。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,槐花黄,举子忙,典出</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">《南部新书》:长安举子落第者,六月后不出,谓之过夏。多借清净庙院,作文章,名曰「夏课」。时语曰:“槐花黄,举子忙。”,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">说的是夏天,和西陆“秋天”没什么关系。</span></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><font color="#0000ff"><font face="宋体" color="#000000"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:</font></font>我记得我读这典故时,不止这些的,再次引用:宋钱易《南部新书》载:“长安举子自六月以后,落第者不出京,谓之过夏。多借静坊庙院及闲宅居住,作新文章,谓之夏课。亦有十人五人醵率酒噀,请题目于知己,朝达谓之私试。七月后设献新课,并于诸州府拔解人,为语曰:‘槐花黄,举子忙’。”此处的忙,实是指行卷,行卷的时间一般是比较固定的,唐代进士考试一般是在正月举行,二月放榜。因此行卷多在头年秋天就开始进行。这也就是《南部新书》乙卷载的:‘槐花黄,举子忙。’</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><font color="#0000ff">所以此处是<font face="宋体" color="#0000ff">西陆我认为是比较贴切的。</font><br/></font><br/></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">第二联:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">异样色香同格调;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">无双品性各清佳。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"> <p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">上联,异样,是指梅花和壶吧,且不论壶能否代表茶,只说梅花和茶的格调相同,这里并没有展示理由,也许,“格调”本来就是个模糊的词。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">上联,异样,是指梅花和壶吧,且不论壶能否代表茶,只说梅花和茶的格调相同,这里并没有展示理由,也许,“格调”本来就是个模糊的词。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">上联,异样,是指梅花和壶吧,且不论壶能否代表茶,只说梅花和茶的格调相同,这里并没有展示理由,也许,“格调”本来就是个模糊的词。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff"> 来者:看</font><font color="#3300ff">图写联,对图的理解可以方方面面,由壶及茶,取其中者,我以为未尝不可,并且此联上下都未指实其物,是以虚着实的写法。</font></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">下联,无双与各,难以理解了,既然无双,那就是独一无二的了,到底是梅花还是茶?我看不如用“一般品性”好。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p></span></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span><p></p></span><p></p><p class="quote"> <font color="#0000ff">来者:这个</font><font color="#0000ff">除了从语感方面考虑用无双,在理解上并不矛盾的,我举个例子说明一下吧!姚明是无双的,刘翔也是无双的,但却各自表现同样的体育精神与各自的巅峰! <br/></font><br/> <br/></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">第三联:</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">卅年保抱提携,殊非易也,平生俯首皆因子;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><br/> <br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">今日扪思馈报,谨以记之,此后守身即孝亲。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p></span></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">没有紧扣母亲节这一主题,但评委说只写母亲、母爱也可以,那就没什么问题了。</span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="quote"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">全联感怀沉郁,隐见受曾国蕃挽乳母联的影响,特别是“平生俯首皆因子”,把母亲的一生做了评价,既把母爱缩小了,也似乎不合时宜,也许作者自有怀抱吧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p class="quote"><font color="#0033ff">来者:此题名是“母亲节”。联中的“今日”不知能否算切呢?另外,正如夜空白云联友所说,此联确是借用了曾的挽乳母联里的概括性几字,结句也确实有概括母亲一生之意,而下联则明显是写通过自己之孝来衬其母爱之大之深。之间并不矛盾呀!</font></p></span></p><p class="quote"><font color="#0033ff">来者:此题名是“母亲节”。联中的“今日”不知能否算切呢?另外,正如夜空白云联友所说,此联确是借用了曾的挽乳母联里的概括性几字,结句也确实有概括母亲一生之意,而下联则明显是写通过自己之孝来衬其母爱之大之深。之间并不矛盾呀!</font></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma;">以上纯属管见,说得不对之处,请海涵。本人对作者的才华还是钦佩的,也并非质疑其第一名的名次。</span></p><p class="quote"><font color="#0000ff">从您意见的细致之处,我感觉出其中的认真态度,欢迎在联学上多多交流!以上回答不到位之处,敬请提出指正!</font></p><p></p>
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