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发表于 2007-6-9 18:48:25 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>哈哈公</i>在2007-6-9 18:15:42的发言:</b><br/><p>下面是诗钟的权威例句(选自《闲话诗钟》)</p><p><strong>二、分詠格 <br/>  即分詠事物也,以不犯題字為合格,例如: <br/><br/>  「岳飛、虎」:分詠 <br/>  畫爾不成翻類犬;字之曰舉並稱鵬(君左)。 </strong></p><p>空空斋、某在斯老师分析“护房树”可能犯题,而例句中用了岳飞的字“鹏举”,竟然大好。<br/><br/>看来李天老师的解释是恰如其分了——马屁拍到马蛋子上。</p></div><p></p><p>俺覺护房樹沒有問題,古人分咏不犯題字即可,其实范圍可以很寬的,內容与其相關即可,這樣才有發揮余地和趣味可言,壞在今人作茧自縛,如茶要分茶葉茶湯,花要分花蕊花枝,皆强作框架耳!</p><p>哈公的聯問題應是出在映焙坊上,找老財算帳就是了,誰叫他经營不力,要是映焙坊如麦當勞一樣出名就沒問題了.</p><p>也引用兩個古鐘:</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">杨贵妃-苏东坡</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">自古环肥殊燕瘦</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">
                </span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">至今玉带在金山</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">西厢-汉高祖</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">崔貌张才成眷属</span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN;">
                </span><span lang="ZH-CN" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;新細明體&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast;">刘兴项灭定江山</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;"><p></p></span></p><p></p>
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发表于 2007-6-9 18:55:24 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>映焙坊</i>在2007-6-9 18:31:57的发言:</b><br/><p><strong>字之曰舉並稱鵬--------------岳飛</strong></p><p>这句我不认为是合格的分咏。咏物咏人应该透过现象看本质,而不是投机取巧。如果这样都算的话,咏毛泽东我也可以这样写了:临帖挥毫常润纸,这分明是扯淡的句子。</p><br/></div><p><strong><font face="Verdana" color="#da2549">毛澤東.映焙坊</font></strong></p><p><font face="Verdana">临帖挥毫常润紙</font></p><p><font face="Verdana">浮烟品茗更添財</font></p>

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