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[原创]二十四番花信首

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发表于 2008-2-25 22:53:43 | 显示全部楼层
<p>不错。漂亮。但梅花的神韵没有见到。。。</p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><strong>几缕幽香噙雪生<br/>---这联字少,却是我最喜欢的一联。噙字,我喜欢。神韵也只在这里看到。。。</strong></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><strong>香透九重天,又见客来熙客往<br/>---这个香浓烈得俗了。。。不是说不给人欣赏啊,可能是手法上的问题。</strong></span></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;"><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体;">三弄笛声<span lang="EN-US">,</span>花心惊破<span lang="EN-US">,</span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">香闻流水处<span lang="EN-US">;<br/>---这个香得不知所云。。。唯字面漂亮。。。</span></span></b></p><p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><b><span style="COLOR: black;">呼野鹤比邻<span lang="EN-US">,</span>抱</span></b><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">闲云</span><span style="COLOR: black;">归隐<span lang="EN-US">,</span>馨香唯有自心知<span lang="EN-US">!<br/>---这个香得凄厉。。。 世无高士,不求凡眼?只是一呼一抱,野鹤闲云既为有情物,又怎止自心知?<p></p></span></span></b></font></font></p><p></p></span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3">人间好友成三<span lang="EN-US">,</span>胜竹行藏<span lang="EN-US">,</span>饶松襟抱<span lang="EN-US">,</span>高怀共话岁寒心<span lang="EN-US">. <br/>---既是好友,为何定要攀比胜饶?</span></font></font></span></b></p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US"></span></font></font></span></b><p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3">萧纲赋里<span lang="EN-US">,</span>苏轼词中<span lang="EN-US">,</span>樽坐倒<span lang="EN-US">,</span>笛卧吹<span lang="EN-US">,</span>抒不尽玉雪襟怀<span lang="EN-US">,</span>金兰气韵<span lang="EN-US"> ; <p></p></span></font></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3">大庾岭头<span lang="EN-US">,</span>罗浮山下<span lang="EN-US">,</span>眼放开<span lang="EN-US">,</span>胸涤净<span lang="EN-US">,</span>赢得些伯夷风骨<span lang="EN-US">,</span>姑射交谊<span lang="EN-US">. </span></font></font></span></b></p><p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US">---眼放开,胸涤净,这便觉得虚了。。。金兰气韵,我不知道是否合适啦。伯夷姑射,隐士仙子,倒是符合。那两兄弟更像义士的说- -b</span></font></font></span></b></p><b><span style="COLOR: black;"><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US"><p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#267612" size="5">最后套3楼的话,只是个人看法,见识也不多,不足为凭,不妥处请谅解。</font></strong></p></span></font></font></span></b></span></span></b></span></span>

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