[原创]枫惹霞红,松嘘云气,万里长空图何意

指尖有蛊

<font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">枫惹霞红,松嘘云气,万里长空图何意</font>

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<p><font face="隶书" color="#417733" size="5"><font color="#996685">枫惹霞红,松嘘云气,万里长空图何意</font></font></p><p><font face="隶书" color="#417733" size="5">帆逐鸥影,滩走江声,一襟晚照怠平生</font></p>

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<p><font face="隶书" color="#417733" size="5">偶个人觉得,出句的画面有些凌乱.</font></p><p><font face="隶书" color="#417733" size="5">比如云/霞,仿佛有些重复.最后一分句的音律姑且不说,和前两分句的联系,好象也不那么紧密,偶大体是含糊着理解的.</font></p>

指尖有蛊

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">原本出的是“高顶苍松嘘云气”觉得“高顶”二字赘了，去掉又觉得不妥，因喜欢这松嘘云气，丢了又觉得可惜，索性又凑了两句，也觉得别扭，词不达意，难不成这“高顶”还真是不可或缺滴？</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span>&nbsp;</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">本想拿来下饭,琢磨着琢磨着，就影响到了食欲，郁闷。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5"></font></span>&nbsp;</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">“图何意”也知出律，又找不出合适的字，一向宽以律已，上来糊弄一下吧。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5"></font></span>&nbsp;</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">律呀律，真愁死我了</font></span></p>[em03][em03][em03]

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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">原本出的是“高顶苍松嘘云气”觉得“高顶”二字赘了，去掉又觉得不妥，</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman';"><font face="隶书" color="#996685" size="5">苍松(XX)嘘云气,用个形容词来表达状态,表示苍劲高古,这样来考虑,你觉得如何?</font></span></p>